I'd read your profile as "only lesbians need apply", that you're only seeking F/F play, and you'd never hear from us. If in fact you're open to cpl/cpl or FMF, you might want to amend your profile to reflect that. Very nice, restrained pics that show some class and style. The rest is well written and literate. :-)

JnD

OK ~ I'll bite. When I first joined this site, I was single, so I'll tell you what I think of your profile as a former unicorn. The one thing that stands out to me is that it sounds like the two of you want to find a woman that will play with the female half of the couple, but not the male half. Right then and there, I'd catagorize you as "absolutely no interest." If you're looking for a bi woman ~ remember that she's bi, not a lesbian that doesn't mind having a man in the room. Bi means that she enjoys women *and* men. So, in addition to narrowing your search to only bi women, you're further narrowing it to bi women that don't mind not playing with the guy. Nothing wrong with that, if that's the case and she should certainly know your rules b/f meeting you, but be prepared that a lot of bi women aren't into that kind of play. Some are. If that's *not* the case, clarify it in your profile. Other than that, I don't see anything really off. It's a pretty standard profile. You say what you look like, what you're looking for, do the "no expectations" thing and give a little info about your personalities. I don't get much of a sense of y'all, tho and given the amount of mail that unicorns get, you need to stand out. Spend a little bit of time just reading profiles. Maybe start w/ ones that have fun tag lines or however you want to do it and see what you read that makes you feel like you've learned a little more about the couple than just the basics, what makes you smile or laugh or catches your attention and try to incorporate some of those things into your profile. Good luck!

well all i can say is ---> Good luck with that one......lol

My husband and I are new to the site - we have played several times before over the past 2 years...but this is the first sight we have joined. As most of you here probably recall... writing your first profile is fun but very frustrating...We are serious about the lifestyle, and are hoping to get serious inquiries, we're here to have fun and hopefully make some lifelong friends. We are seeking female play only...any couples or single males just aren't our thing...that being said...any suggestions, and positive criticism about our profile will be greatly appreciated.