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TOPIC: Please_critique_my_profile
Created by: Onanist
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I've been working on my profile lately and am seeking input on how to make it better. Please review, constructive criticism welcome. Thank You!!

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Your 1st sentence starts with "I looking" ...you need to fix that. The rest is rather boring, no offense but shows little effort on your part to convey who you are.You'll need to show some personality in order to get noticed. My only impression, rather unfavorable is from the last paragraph of your profile.......

"I'd rather contact you to find out what is behind your attractive smile, his proud member (yum), or her luscious breasts (yum,yum) and purrr-fect pussy (yum,yum,yum). "

You sound like a locker room frat boy rather than an adult, respectful male. I think you make a poor 1st impression with talk like that. Although this is a sex site I found your comments distasteful and exhibits a lack of class .

Overall is needs more thought put into it.

Mrs Sav

Anniston AL
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I've been working on my profile lately and am seeking input on how to make it better. Please review, constructive criticism welcome. Thank You!!

Waterbury CT
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TOPIC: Please critique my profile
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