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TOPIC: Please Look At Our Profile
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Please let us know if our profile needs more work done to it. Not many response to it .
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Hello PleasureSeekers,

I'm afraid I have to agree with Kat and lix -- your profile does sound a bit blah. On the other hand, if we lived near you, we probably would write you, so it's hardly a bad profile.

How might you liven it up? I'm guessing from your nickname that you like oral. While you might think that would be too obvious to mention again, that might help. What other sexual things do you like? Kissing? Outdoors? Mention some of them, and maybe include a fantasy that you might like to have come true. What makes you fun?

The "no longer night owls" thing may put a lot of people off. It conjures up images of you going to bed by 8:00 at night. That means that people who work late (you're still in the demographic that works) will want to go out for dinner or drinks just about the time you're going to bed. You might want to say something like "we love to play on weekend afternoons" if that's true. You don't want people to think you're in the married-but-not-to-each-other category so you might want to add to the profile that you're a married couple, if you are.

Good luck with the search!

- ST

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I agree with Starrynights. I think most people want to meet fun, exciting, upbeat, invigorating, refreshing and last, but not least, sexy people. I'm just not getting a WOOHOO feeling when I read your profile. I would suggest adding some excitement to it.

Good luck.

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Hi Seekers and welcome to the forums : )

Sorry to hear you haven't been having a lot of traffic. I read through your profile and really couldn't discern anything too negative, although it could be jazzed up a bit to show more of your personality. It would be nice to include in the first section (What We Are Looking For), whether you like to take your time or play on first meet, same or separate rooms, etc.

In the Description section, you need to fix the age of Mrs. Pleasure to reflect the same age as in the profile stats. Many people will look at this and be turned off.

Typos: Under Fantasy section -- "We been" change to "We've been." In the What Else section -- "Even if it is so" change to "Even if it is to."

I would take out the first sentence in the Fantasy section as it kind of makes you sound "old." Definitely state what you do and don't like, but make sure the focus is more on the positive.

The pic you have is okay. It shows a very nice couple. Key word, "nice." Now, I'm not suggesting you don whips, chains and leather...but think of it this way. What profiles do you like to click on...what gets your attention? This is a swing site. Lingerie pics of her, chest or back pics of him. G-rated pics are fine. But you definitely need to add more photos that show you looking more like a swing couple rather than a couple at a church fellowship meal.

Lastly, it would really help if you could get some more recent certs. The one you have is from 2007, which makes it look like you've been out of commission for a while. Are there any meet and greets in your area? Get out there and meet some like minded folks and get some certs : )

Best wishes -- hope you have fun : )

Kat

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Please let us know if our profile needs more work done to it. Not many response to it .

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