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TOPIC: Please, critique the profile we have written
Created by: Danovany
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Some profiles are very long; some we have seen barely say anything. We wanted to be informative, truthful, but not terribly long. We are still not really happy with how it turned out. Plus we don't get as many emails as we would like. Please critique our profile. What do you like, what do you dislike. What may we have left off that you would like answered? Would you delete any of the default pictures? Tell us if it could get across the same messages more succinct or in a kinder way. Anything you have to say will be welcome and appreciated. Reaching out for help, Dawn
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Dano,

Just go to Tools on the toolbar, scroll down and you'll see Profile Decoration Tips.

Kat

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Kat, Thank you so much for all the suggestions. I would love to use color on our profile information like you mentioned. Unfortunately, I do not know how to do that. Have a great day, Dawn

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Hey Dano ~~ Welcome to the forums!

Positives: You guys sound like a lot of fun, cover everything important, and have some great pics.

Things I would change: Take out the very first sentence in your profile. Always start with a positive rather than a negative. Instead, I would move it. Where you have typed TURN OFFS: - Hit a carriage return and place it under the heading of TURN OFFS. Then, put the little sentence about not liking e-mails/IM. Lastly, put the sentence about not liking hairy bodies. It will just clean up your profile a little bit . You might want to highlight TURN OFFS in blue or red.

I like your pics, but for the default pic, I would choose the one of both of you with the umbrella...shows more of both of you and your personality as a couple. Or, the one with Mrs. Dano facing the wall in the sexy stockings. The default pic that you have doesn't grab my attention and is very dark. What pics grab YOUR attention when you're looking at couples? Exactly :)

You don't have a cert. Some folks actually won't get together with others who don't have certs. This is easily remedied if you attend a meet and greet in your area. I see you've been to clubs and events -- if you're chatting with some fun people, just ask them after a bit if they'd mind certing you, and you would do the same for them?

Best wishes :) Kat

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>please do not be offended if we MIGHT want to speak via phone with both of you before making a date

I would change that to "if a couple, BOTH ladies must be available to speak on phone"

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Some profiles are very long; some we have seen barely say anything. We wanted to be informative, truthful, but not terribly long. We are still not really happy with how it turned out. Plus we don't get as many emails as we would like. Please critique our profile. What do you like, what do you dislike. What may we have left off that you would like answered? Would you delete any of the default pictures? Tell us if it could get across the same messages more succinct or in a kinder way. Anything you have to say will be welcome and appreciated. Reaching out for help, Dawn

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