dutchman,

welcome to south florida hell.

You can attend any of the clubs in the local area any night but saturday as asingle man. We recommend club hedonism in pompano beach. we usually dont' go on fridays but have been there once or twice on fridays and it was fun.

I guess you profile is fine.

Welcum to the forums Dutchman,

Might I also add along with Gina's comment that removing the "not fitting in" might also be advisable. Same reason as previously stated... negative connotations. Always leave them on a positive note and a smile sweetie.

Also, cut your sentences into shorter ones where you have run-ons hun. The rest looks good.

RaveN (:~

Ok. Hope you can accept some constructive "criticism." Things I like: Your sense of humor, especially about yourself. You have real pictures. Things that need some improvement: You have no pronouns. It reads a bit choppy without full sentences here and there. Yes, I do that too, but I also include a few well-constructive ones with the word "I" in them as well. You main picture is probably of you at work, but for some strange reason, the first thing I thought of was that you're teaching Sunday School! Please think about removing the line about you being out of shape. You don't have to restate that. The Big Bear comment was good, and gives people an idea of body type/size. The "out of shape" comment is negative. Add another pic or two and a few more specifics, keep that sense of humor, and good luck! G.