would be interested in knowing what you think aboutour profile? I think I covered it all, but hey, ya never know. Thanks!!

Nice Job and covered quite a bit.

Would you mind and look at ours, I think our post is just above this one.

thanks

Thank you SO much for taking the time to give us some advice! We'll take everything into consideration and hopefully our profile will be the better for it! :)

Thanks again, everyone!

J&N

"Let us know if we suck :( " wait, your supposed to let US know you suck! :) Honestly the only 3 negatives that stand out (as it reads today) is... The serious lack of pictures. The one you have delivers a very good component, Smiles, but it helps a lot if you let people see what you look like. Dont be shy. My idea of HWP is different from the next guys. 5'2" and 135lbs is well within what i would consider HWP. The line about no fatties, is funny but I'd probably consider the "we are not Ken and barbie and don't expect you to be either". It says the same thing, its lower key, doesn't push anyone insecurity buttons. And the "we troll in every internet dating pond and nobody likes us" makes a reader ask "why are these people not having any luck? flakes? trolls? creeps? There seem to be waves of contacts, I didnt get a single message on this site for 4 months. Lately, we get a couple a week. It happens, but I wouldn't tell people that. I really don't see the 420 thing as a "problem". If your looking for people to hook up with, smoke and play, then that is a pretty blunt way to say that. if you are occasional smokers, its not a requirement and don't fit the typical "stoner" mold, I'd consider toning it down. Good luck :)

Hello! Okay, let me see...number one, your profile name lol. 420. It is your right to be 420 friendly and its cool that you are honest about it...but know that it does put off some people. With it being your profile name some may pass you by thinking you are stoners. Your "so giving it one last try" line...I'd take that out. People do not like negativity in profiles. Now given, I have had my own Jerry Maguire moments. But people do not like them. Even if this is your last try, I should not know about that. "he's got it where it counts"...lol, I'd honestly take that out as well. Jay does not care about the other guy having a cock larger or smaller than his own...but males have egos and I have found that men do not like reading lines where the other male says he "has it where it counts". If the other wife asks you your size or for cock shots have them available...but that could be interpreted as bragging. Another faux pas. I would rephrase and modify your profile a bit taking out the negativity. Be careful on ranting about what hwp is. It is important to some people. Keep it funny and humorous as it is, thats good. The "he MORE than knows how to please a woman".....be careful with that as well. I am not saying you should NOT put forth your attributes. Just be careful because you don't want to be interpreted as being a shit talker...I say that because shit talkers notoriously do not put out what they say they will. I am NOT insinuating that you are...I am saying that perhaps it could be interpreted that way. You do not want to seem like you are super cock, coming in to show the other couple how its done, thats what I'm saying. I would also take pics showing your body types and frame. Thats about it. :0)

Hey! Wicked! :)
Thanks for the comment! :-D

Two days and no comments?

Geez --- Your profile doesn't suck at all, although you commented that you've recently updated it. Did it suck before?

Anyway, you sound like a couple of fun people. Not too many admit to being 'geeky' here on SLS! Your profile paints a pretty good picture of you and I'd think you'd receive a fair amount of attention from other, compatible couples.

Let us know if we suck :(

We think we covered just about everything.