Thanks Gina which part sounds stiff? I am gong to have my wife and I update it this weekend. In the meantime I will add what we are looking for.

You sound a bit "stiff," and not in a good way. This is by no means a criticism though, as it takes time and continuing revisions to make a profile flow more smoothly. It really sounds as if one person wrote it. Again, that's not a bad thing, just an observation.

Your pictures are lovely, and you are pretty clear in what you're all about, but maybe not exactly as clear in what/who you're looking for. Couples? People to take pics? People to have sex in the same room? If you'd like, you can add all that.

If not, it's not a bad profile at all.

Good luck, and read a lot of profiles and add what you like.

Gina

What can be improved?