Thanks for the suggestions and nice compliment.

"I most fantasize about the hotwife lifestyle where I am a third man to the couple." That was the only sentence I feel you should rewrite. If you are the third man, then there are 3 men and one woman, and I don't think that's what you meant to say. Also, "most" to "mostly." Other than that, you have a great public picture posted...wow...you look amazing (the hard work certainly shows and you look like a 30 yr old) I think you write with intelligence and thought, and many couples will find you appealing. You sound confident in yourself, which is a big plus, but also respectful. You might want to consider writing about more successes than "complaints," although you don't sound as if you're complaining with any of the negative experiences, just learning from them. Good luck in the lifestyle. Gina

Friends, I've just finished my profile and am looking for some feedback. I read through a few posts on the topic and included many suggestions before finalizing my current profile. Any suggestions would be appreciated. Thanks,