You have a wonderful profile. It's full, it's fun, and people know what you want.

I'd change only three things:
1) Put in a picture of the man. I'd certainly like to play with you, but would my wife want to play with him?

2) Swap the second and third paragraphs. Many people would read it that when you're looking for a woman, you're not looking for a couple, which is where you're going to get most of the action.

3) Check for typographical errors. I only caught one: 'Your' rather than 'You're' in the second to last paragraph, but even one can make some people say 'whoa!'

Again, those are nit-picks, you've done very well.