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I think you do well in stating what you are looking for. The part where you describe yourselves is a bit long, IMO. Great pics BTW. I agree on needing to put a space or 2 after each period--will make it easier to read. There's a place or 2 where you say "were" but need to write "we're" or "we are." Otherwise, looks good! Happy hunting :) Mrs NewBeginnings2

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Hey guys, I took a look and it appears to cover all the bases. I will add my first impression is that you have a few grammar mistakes, but that is just me. You might try to add a little space between sentences so it does not look so crowded. Over all, it looked great though. Hot pics! I always enjoy seeing more of the male, but again I am female, the pics are great though! Happy swinging!

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TOPIC: New profile