Well, wadayaknow? OP complains that nobody responded, so people responded. Two weeks later, with OP logging on daily, (I checked, curious to see if he would take the advice he requested,) no changes or improvements to his profile......guess he didn't really care in the first place.

Obviously she's familiarly referring to the OP's grandmother ;-)

Shell..."grammer???"

Looking back at your profile, one more thing comes to mind worthy of comment.

"If you contact me, remember that emails with a naked photo get special consideration."

Quite frankly, it sounds like you are a lonely guy looking for masturbation fodder, too cheap to buy porn or too lazy to browse the net for free nudes to perv. Taking out that comment, or revising it to something less desperate sounding, would be another big step toward classing up your profile.

Okay, I see a few issues. Spelling and grammar are important, especially when you say you are a successful business owner and are financially stable. Just being honest, the grammer, pronunciation and spelling on your profile do not bring to my mind a successful gentleman. So work on that. Your pics. The one of you in the bedroom, get rid of it. Your hair is a mess and it looks like you popped out of bed and took the picture. Your profile. Well, there are a few issues. Number one, take the part about you being in a rut out. We do not want to party with people who describe their life as being in a rut. Also, you mention looking for 1 woman...this is a bad place to look for Mrs. Right, we are usually not relationship people.

Welcome to SLS. Although it may sound blunt, my first suggestion is change your tag line to something far less forward or crude. Remember, single guys are a dime a dozen in the lifestyle, your first impression is important. When the first thing I read is you offering to show off your cock, that puts you on par with the rest of the unoriginal bragging horny single guys on here :( You're "not 1 of the pack"? -- second suggestion, change that "1" to "one", and while you're at it, change "hr's" to "hours", unless you intended for your abbreviation of hours to possess something. Start setting yourself apart from the pack by using actual words, (using the site's free spell checker is always a good choice when updating a profile, too,) making for a much better impression upon the gentle reader. Lastly, unless you mean hanging around Walmart before they changed logos, SLS doesn't like (and the site's terms of service forbid) the inclusion of other chat-site contact info, such as mentioning Yahoo by your yellow smiley guy reference. I'd suggest you drop that entirely. You have a life membership, giving you full chat and email privileges on SLS, why devalue it? If you want additional feedback, I'll be happy to check your profile again in a few days to see how it reads after you've made revisions. Good luck, Mrs TF3.

I always have a bit of a problem with impatience, so there's that to consider.
Also pics taken by yourself with a cell phone in a hotel mirror...but that's just my own preferences.

Ok. As for content, it's ok. Make sure you're saying everything you'd like for the woman in question to know...what stands out, what sets you apart from others?

As for some of the simple errors, here are a few:
Change "wan" to "want"
Add an "s" to "desire"
"todays" should be possessive, so change it to "today's"
"hr's" should be "hours"
C'mon, you can take the time to type one extra stroke, right?

Good luck and enjoy this site.
G.

No one has any suggestions. :(

Hello, I stumbled across this site and thought it would be fun and interesting. This looked like the place int introduce myself, so here I am. If you would like, could you post some suggestions on how i could make my profile better, please and thank you :)

Have Fun
GWK