My single guy profile: Swingers Discussion 140168

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Created by: the3rdguy	The original post for this thread was deleted.

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User Details are only visible to members.	Checked back on your profile. Your improvements since our first response are showing you in a much better light. Nice job :) As we mentioned before, you'll want to get rid of your external (Yahoo) contact info. As is, you're in violation of the site's terms of service. While we don't speak for SLS, we have seen profiles of friends taken offline for ignoring that rule. Good luck, TF3
Saint Paul MN			Username hidden (465 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	Oh, and I also think that you need to include some sort of public picture. It does not have to show your face or be a nude picture. Have friend take a nice 3/4, clothed body shot of you and then blur out the face
Lake Wylie SC			Username hidden (610 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	OK: The second "sentence" in your description is a train wreck! Suggested change- I'm a tall blonde with an open mind and free spirit. I'm also a well rounded , intelligent guy who enjoys stimulating conversation. I'm a good listener who can follow directions (WEG!). To me, this reads much more easily.
Lake Wylie SC			Username hidden (610 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	Thanks tort. I apparently didn't use spell check.
Lake Wylie SC			Username hidden (610 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	3rd guy, you seem to have taken some of the previous advice. Your profile is looking pretty good. Although there are still some sentence structure issues. Not all responses will be tackful. However, if you ask for advice, you must be prepared to hear the responses. Even when it is not positive.
Lake Wylie SC			Username hidden (610 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	Ok so maybe TF3's first comment could be interpreted as calling you a dumbass. I could see that you might take offense to that, however if you look at the spirit of the post, they were trying to tell you that your profile paints the mental picture of a dumbass. The high ground would be to take the advice and just thank them for the input. You don't have to implement it if you dont want to. If you want to show everyone your true colors, it's up to you. So my two cents, if you are interested. "Iam" is hard to read, I stumble over it when I read your profile. I also choked on "a fun single women" since "a" is singular and "women" is plural. It should be "woman". You may call it picky but when I was reading it I stumbeled...it just didn't flow. "Know any funny stories"? wtf? where did that come from? It's completely out of context. Well enough, I feel I'm probably just wasting my time anyway. Good luck, I have a feeling you're going to need it.
Greenville NC			Username hidden (139 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	Typical to a lonely or desperate single male. Rather than taking suggestions to improve your profile, as requested, you defensively tell those offering suggestions "that's how I write, live with it." So be it. However, you did ask for improvement feedback, and it was offered in the spirit of your request. No skin off our nose, TF3. ps, spell check, as you claimed to have used, flags the word iam as misspelled -- since you corrected it, and the several other spelling errors, after the feedback was given on your profile, yet the use of iam shows up again in your response post, it is my guess "laid back" is not the correct self-description for you, perhaps you ought use the term "lazy" instead. Seriously, spell check is only a single click away.
Saint Paul MN			Username hidden (465 post)

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TOPIC: My single guy profile