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not bad....I would suggest some casual pics (face blurred would be fine) like in the park or at a party, restaurant, or at home.
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Better. It is no longer giving us a negative first impression. Continue expanding your profile to further set yourself apart from the pack. And add more pictures. Clothed full-body pictures, and anything not taken in front of your bathroom mirror are a plus.
Caution! By proclaiming yourself as college educated and a professional, you've set yourself up for a higher level of expectation from the reader. Double check your syntax, spelling and punctuation. Something as simple as using the possessive year's in pace of the plural years now becomes a red flag against you. |
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Your first paragraph pretty much says it all - you are a horny single male looking for sex. Next profile....
Beyond the suggested proofreading, seriously consider adding more info to pull yourself away the first impression described above. One more item worth mentioning: Get rid of any external contact info, like your Yahoo messenger name. Having crap like that only shows readers you don't respect rules and limits put in place by others -- case in point, the terms of service established by SLS. |
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