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TOPIC: It's Judgement Day
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| Ok, so we've been on here a while and been both critical and complimentary of several other profiles out there. So it's time to give back and let y'all judge our profile. Don't hold back (by now most of you've got it figured out we don't!) |
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Thanks y'all. Changed some wording a bit, took out some of the (). Thanks again!
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Charleston WV |
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here is my 1st critque on here...
I think its is for the most part very good... I would change the line in Fantasies, something about 'from ANYONE out there" it sounds a little like you are not selective the way its written! Also consider not doing (blah blah we mean by blah blah) too much.. as I read it, I felt like there were alot of ( ) to explain something. I like the complete sentences and it is direct about you both! Just my thoughts! Good luck to you, happy swinging! |
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Ok, so we've been on here a while and been both critical and complimentary of several other profiles out there. So it's time to give back and let y'all judge our profile. Don't hold back (by now most of you've got it figured out we don't!)
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Charleston WV |
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