Is it possible that our profile scares people away: Swingers Discussion 175551

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Is it possible that our profile scares people away: Swingers Discussion 175551

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TOPIC: Is it possible that our profile scares people away

Created by: sweettart Original Starting post for this thread:
It seems we get a lot of inquires but not a lot of follow up.Especially when the wife of the couple has a chance to read our profile.

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User Details are only visible to members.	I wont lie, I read about half your profile, it wasnt intimidating it was just longggg.
Spring TX			Username hidden (1865 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	Generally speaking, your profile looks good to me. Did find a couple minor items to tweak: Wrong word: --"This includes couples that think we are here to entertain THERE husbands while they are in town...." should be THEIR. (I'm surprised that one slipped by Gina, she is a bona fide proofreading goddess!) Punctuation use: --Most of your commas either have no space,or follow the space ,but can be quickly remedied. --Excessive use of ellipsis, specifically between most sentences in your profile, is visually distracting while reading. Suggest you use them sparingly, otherwise replace with a single period to end each sentence. Single males: --You have single males under "fantasies". Granted, you go into detail about not wanting them to write...but a single male is likely to see "single males" under fantasies, with things going down hill rapidly from there. (I was a single male once, that's how we think, LOL.) Suggest you change your interest level for single males to "block them", remove the paragraph entirely, and add a simple "no husbands playing alone" caveat to the couples paragraph in the "what else" section of your profile. I'm off to bed after taking the red-eye home last night. My perspective may change after ample sleep. Good night and good luck. Mr TF3
Saint Paul MN			Username hidden (467 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	We agree with SexusNTexas , Your not intimidating to us... WE liked your profile & Pics...We only have one question, Why do all the good couples live so far away?
Okanogan WA			Username hidden (19 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	You are not intimidating to the people who are like minded. Your profile is great, wouldn't change a thing, except a "typo" where it says of Deb, what a womEn, instead of WomAn...but that's ok too, especially when she's got the energy and drive of more than one woman :) I liked it. Well said. Good luck in swinging. Gina
San Antonio TX			Username hidden (6114 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	It seems we get a lot of inquires but not a lot of follow up.Especially when the wife of the couple has a chance to read our profile.
Dallas TX			Username hidden (2225 post)

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TOPIC: Is it possible that our profile scares people away