I wont lie, I read about half your profile, it wasnt intimidating it was just longggg.

Generally speaking, your profile looks good to me. Did find a couple minor items to tweak: Wrong word: --"This includes couples that think we are here to entertain THERE husbands while they are in town...." should be THEIR. (I'm surprised that one slipped by Gina, she *is* a bona fide proofreading goddess!) Punctuation use: --Most of your commas either have no space,or follow the space ,but can be quickly remedied. --Excessive use of ellipsis, specifically between most sentences in your profile, is visually distracting while reading. Suggest you use them sparingly, otherwise replace with a single period to end each sentence. Single males: --You have single males under "fantasies". Granted, you go into detail about *not* wanting them to write...but a single male is likely to see "single males" under fantasies, with things going down hill rapidly from there. (I was a single male once, that's how we think, LOL.) Suggest you change your interest level for single males to "block them", remove the paragraph entirely, and add a simple "no husbands playing alone" caveat to the couples paragraph in the "what else" section of your profile. I'm off to bed after taking the red-eye home last night. My perspective may change after ample sleep. Good night and good luck. Mr TF3

We agree with SexusNTexas , Your not intimidating to us... WE liked your profile & Pics...We only have one question, Why do all the good couples live so far away?

You are not intimidating to the people who are like minded. Your profile is great, wouldn't change a thing, except a "typo" where it says of Deb, what a womEn, instead of WomAn...but that's ok too, especially when she's got the energy and drive of more than one woman :)

I liked it. Well said. Good luck in swinging.
Gina

It seems we get a lot of inquires but not a lot of follow up.Especially when the wife of the couple has a chance to read our profile.