I love the profile, when I update mine, I may...borrow (outright steal) some lines from it. Very very nice profile. AND feel free to send me that calf shot, I need a new background for my desktop. Currnelty using the Todd Mcfarlane Dorothy Doll. Your legs look much better. Send me an email if interested in allowing me to borrow that pic.

I really loved your profile. You say a lot of the same things we do, only more adamantly. I think your profile, written as it is, will help you weed out a lot of people. You may not get as many emails and responses with a direct and specific approach, but you certainly WILL get quality people looking for quality people. If I saw and read your profile on sls while browsing, I would've certainly been one to respond to it and perhaps compliment you. (nice legs, by the way, very toned!) If I took out anything at all, it would be overuse of exclaimation points. You only need one to do the job. You're very clear in your statements, so when they stand out, they stand alone. Maybe offset your more assertive statements with surrounding whitespace. Also makes for an easier read. Okay, good luck, and we wish you well in finding people you enjoy. Sounds like you have a good idea on house parties, and we feel the same about being "interrupted." Oh, my favorite line? "unfettered access to each other" Loved that one. Gina

I do think you have a nice, descriptive and intelligent profile. That being said, I do think it is a little rigid and harsh. I agree with you, say it to avoid wasted time and mis-understandings. However. You do not want to come across as snobby or authoratative. I would definately keep it like it is but modify the wording to come across as friendlier. First of all, you want to make sure you let people know WHY you want to avoid drama...because you want to have fun. Then people will say oh okay, they aren't snobby they just want to have fun. Throw in some humor. You want to tell us about you, not just what you WON'T do. If all you tell me is what you WON'T do and not what you like to do it just has a harsher edge to it. People do not like harsh, negative profiles so I would definately soften it up a bit.

We don't want to sound too rigid, but want to be clear about what we are looking for and how we expect others to behave.