You're right, Gina, much better. Looks like the OP finally got serious about improving his profile this time around.

I will agree on the photo in the mirror picture...almost every single guy has one of those, so to NOT have one would be refreshing.

I thought your profile was ok, didn't really see major problems with it. I would NOT start out with that statement about no limitations...it's a negative sounding statement right off the bat (people see the words "I do not want..." and don't get much past that mentally...it takes time for a negative word to lose effect).

Put the dancing thing further up...it's something that sets you apart from the herd a bit, and I think it may get a good response.

Gina

Take a look at the OP's posting history -- IMO, you're wasting your time giving him profile feedback.

Why? Because he posted a profile help request nine months ago, even posted a second time to complain about no responses to his request, members stepped up to the plate and posted several suggestions, and yet he didn't make any changes to his profile at that time.

Looking at his profile tonight, the same "recommended improvement" issues are still present.

Not saying you shouldn't help him, just saying he's demonstrated (at least to us) a lack of interest with regard to actually improving his profile and thus his success on SLS.

Sorry, you're not going to like this, but here's the truth as the male half see's it (btw, if you read our profile, you'll realize we're pretty blunt) 1.) You're a single male. Don't expect alot of attention to begin with. Single males are a dime a dozen (I was one once and I sent a ton of emails with only about 1 or 2 replies out of a 100). 2.) The profile reads more like a match dot com profile than a swingers profile. 3.) Most of the photos scream "Tool" and not in a good way. Especially the self pic in the mirror and the one with your Hummer. 4.) Every single guy's fantasy is 2 women at once. You don't stand out with that line. And don't try and replace it with your great oral skills either. That won't work. Nothing harmful or mean meant, just the way it comes across. I'm sure you're actually a great guy and I wish you luck!

I dont seem to be getting much attention. Could you, would you please look over my profile and tell me what you think I should revamp. Thank you for your time.