Still only a cock shot? It's been 5 days, what happened to those other pictures you were going to post?

You mention being kinky, why not expand your fantasies section so others get an idea of your kink preferences?

Proof read your entire profile, several run on sentences need realignment. This is why it is recommended you read the profile out loud, slowly, so you are forced to read it as written. Make notes of what doesn't work and modify.

Good luck

You're missing the point of our picture comments. Seriously, putting up a new picture showing a different angle of your genitals doesn't fool anyone. Get a clue and lose the cock. Try posting a few decent pictures of you -- maybe something full-body-ish, face optional, showing you as an interested and interesting person. Having one shot of your favorite play partner is fine when it's among half a dozen g-rated pictures. Only having pictures of your favorite play partner shows a lack of interest in anything but getting laid, despite what you've written in your profile....might I suggest several other websites better suited for what you seek? Looking at your profile text, read it out loud slowly, or have a friend read it to you, and make note of what doesn't sound right. Move things around, reword, whatever, until it works. Also, for consideration, you can set a filter in options to automatically block free members, if you want to limit yourself to paid only at some point. I know, our suggestions may sound harsh, but as you asked for feedback on making your profile better, I'm taking that as you actually want to pull yourself away from the single male "I have a cock, do me" pack. Good luck, we'll check back in a couple days :)

We both took a look at your profile....glad you posted here for peer review, because, quite frankly, it needs work. Profile body: Clean up your first section and get it on task. It should be about what you are looking for, not bragging about how you f#$%. And your comments about sharing face pictures if we like what you have posted already....are you serious? You have nothing but an erect penis in tighty-whities.... Profile pictures: All six of your public pictures are cock shots, trying to show off your erection. From her point of view, she gave up on you and your profile, figuring you're just another dime-a-dozen single male aiming to get blocked. I figure you are simply clueless about swinging, perhaps you got SLS confused with some other alternate friend finding website. Either way, you're not doing yourself any favors with the public pictures -- if you're that proud of your member, grab a tube of KY and go to town polishing your rod it to a high gloss shine while perving other websites. We recommend, if you're serious, putting up some decent public pictures, face pics optional, and rewrite the first section entirely. As a single male, you need to make a favorable first impression to break away from the pack. Right now, it's just not happening. Post when you've made changes, and we'll give it a second look. Good luck, Mr TF3