Yeah, lots of fun emotions there...lol beside my volume is turned all the way up and could not hear you.

Added a video to the profile
Edmund

I see most of the advice did not stick...lol

I agree with both of you.

Ed, you still say size is Not an issue and then go on the make it an issue. Being a single guy I don't think the size of a woman would have you turn her down, cut all that crap out. One sentence saying you are experienced is enough...all men think they are all that and a bag of chips, most that think that leave a woman wanting for more...lol

All I know is this thread is tripping me out. OP, I would prefer to see your paragraphs fixed..it honestly looks like one loooong paragraph. Also, you don't tell us what you like. I understand that you are well traveled, but it does not say what you like to do. I enjoy profiles that open the door just a peep so I can see what kind of people or person this is. As far as describing women, I think its excessive. You could say "I love women of all colors, shapes and sizes" and say what it took you a long time to say. You seem to love tall ladies, so you could leave a sentence emphasizing this. Anyways, there is no need for you and Scotty to be at each other's throats. Scotty is blunt but honest. Anyways, take care. Shelly

Well, as you can see, I chopped it up, to try to remove the offensive comments. I will work on the humor, later.
I don't think I said that I was looking for a first FMF, I would like to have many more, and yes I can Fantasize about them.
But no I haven't had either a FFMF or a MFM, Most of my training has been with women of many different types. Did I learn enough to be "The Instructor?" Well, you will just have to meet me in person to find out if the name is justified! LOL! Besides being a life member I don't think I can change it now!

Edmund

Hello Edmund, Male half answering here. It looks like you have already condensed your profile, because it is on the long side of average, but not excessive, and it looks like "had" is replaced with "been with". When you said you were looking for MFM with "emphasis on the female" I wondered what emphasis meant. Most likely you meant you would direct all your attention to the female, but it came out ambiguous, like you might give most of your attention to the female and just rub the guy's back or leg, so it would be a 90/10 or maybe 75/25 split. I highly doubt that is what you wanted readers to think, so you should reword that to eliminate any potential apprehension. Correct the discrete/discreet usage. You say not to be intimidated by your education, but your profile does not say anything about it. I think that is left over from before you revised it. One positive note is that you said you aren't a trekkie. That is something technical types always have to distance themselves from. Also it is good you did not mention you are a physicist. That would get you thrown into the engineer/programmer/accountant reject pile. Remember the purpose of the site. One of the earlier responses said "even perfected cold fusion in an old tin bucket in your garage has little or nothing to do with why any of us are here!" One of the big mistakes single guys make is they write a profile like they are looking for a relationship. That is fine for a dating site, but it won't attract couples who don't want to get into a extramarital dating relationship.

I posted my Alias, of course. It is One I have used for over 10 years! It has similarities to my real name.
Edmund

That's Ok ,Poly, I'll ask you to look at it later after I revise It. If you would, please. For most of the the rest of you, I'll come back after I get the revised Profile posted. I do confess that it was written mainly for another site where couples are rare. I doctored it up minimally for This site and added the personal dimensions, because every one kept asking for them. And a especical message for my dear troubled friend, Scotty, I wonder why I would Block you, given all the abuse you have handed me. You're the name caller here!. You are the one, who never has anything positive to say. You are damn right I blocked, as is my privilege and I would do to anyone else who could only spew vindictive BS! Bye Scotty. Go insult someone who cares about your opinion! LOL! Oh and by the bye, I did report you to management for your ongoing abuse. Perhaps a second opinion might bring your behavior home to roost. I so apologize for losing my temper with you earlier. Have a great life! ROTFL Edmund (not eddie, Ed, or even "Hey You!") PS While Bellinger is an English Name, My heritage is over 2/3rds Scot. As was my dear, departed wife! Figured I would give you something else to call me a liar about. My Scottish Heritage goes back to the 1292, It was danish before that. I have two ancestors that were quite famous, one of whom is buried in Westminster Abby. So in the most strict sense, I do Know who I am and where I came from! LOL Have a great day!