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TOPIC: How Does It Look
Created by: youngbi4older
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Hey, fairly new guy here and I'm looking for critiques of my profile. I've looked at some of the other advice threads and tried to use them as a guide when creating my own profile, but would love some feedback from others.
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Thanks for the advice Kat!

Best wishes to you and your hubby as well.

Staten Island NY
 
 
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Hi Youngbi ~~ Welcome to the forums :)

I can't believe you're only 22! Your profile is written better than people more than twice your age! You've done a very good job of covering everything. Regarding your pics: I really like your face pic and would use that as the default - very sharp. The other pic is fine, but since you're physically fit, it would be nice to also have a full length pic (G-rated, sharp outfit). One where you're skiing would work, too!

As far as typos, these are very minor: Under Description you have a list. Either place a period at the end of each sentence, or don't, but make it uniform. Under Fantasies, you have a run-on sentence. Put a period after "MFM." Get rid of the "and" and then start the new sentence with "I have many..."

You already have a cert, which will really help you! If you haven't already, attend some meet and greets, which are a great way to meet couples and singles in your area. Many couples specifically look for certs when searching for SM's.

Best wishes to you :) Kat

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Hey, fairly new guy here and I'm looking for critiques of my profile. I've looked at some of the other advice threads and tried to use them as a guide when creating my own profile, but would love some feedback from others.

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TOPIC: How Does It Look