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TOPIC: Hello Would like a profile review
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Hello everyone,
We have not had very many emails or responses lately, was wondering if anyone would be kind enough to review our profile and give us some helpful advice on changing it. Things we should add or take away...do we sound rude, pushy, etc? Thanks in advance, B&H |
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It looks good. You should be able to catch a few good couples, now.
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Thanks guys for your advice. I have tweeked my profile a little bit and updated pictures. Hope it sounds and looks a little better now.
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Drop the drinking pic. Shoot a pic of the two of you together; she in something skimpy, him in sexy shorts.
You live in a small to medium metro area. So you may have to widen your search for others. Once we get down to what we want, there is a limited field in most locations. |
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Agree with TABLE's comments, especially take out the tiresome Ken and Barbie sentence. Since pictures are probably 90% of allure (at least for guys, and guys are the ones mostly doing the reviews) I suggest you add more of her is sexy poses, and with good camara work. Do that and we'll decide if you look like Ken or Barbie or better - or not better. Plus you must have a couple of him, looking like a nice guy, preferably in a bathing suit, showing his face. Most Gals are more interested in personality provided the guy looks "nice, or cute." Good luck.
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Two things stand out on our first read of your ad:
Looking for- the first section should be about the people you seek, not you. Move the "you" stuff to the second section. Pictures- add pictures of him; the picture of you drinking doesn't do anything for us; post something other than shots of your breasts. Candid G-rated pics with both of you are always a plus. YMMV |
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Hello everyone,
We have not had very many emails or responses lately, was wondering if anyone would be kind enough to review our profile and give us some helpful advice on changing it. Things we should add or take away...do we sound rude, pushy, etc? Thanks in advance, B&H |
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