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User Details are only visible to members.	Agreed: pretty good overall Since I can't help but find typos (I swear that it is a curse), I will point out a couple for you. Please note that this is real nit-picky stuff on my part and can be easily skipped (and probably should be ;). Please note that I use ALL CAPS to show the changes where possible - you should use lower case in the actual profile. In the first section, "We do not to web cam or phone sex." should be "We do not DO web cam or phone sex." - also, add a space after that sentence. On the next sentence correct the typo "plesae" End of that paragraph, change "We are looking for couples who can laugh and have fun not be to serious." to "We are looking for couples who can laugh and have fun; DON'T be TOO serious." Under Fantasies, change "This kiddies are backfor the summer so we do not plenty of play time." to "THE kiddies are BACK FOR the summer, so we do not HAVE plenty of play time." Change "(unless they have are very classy)" to "(unless they are very classy)" Capitalize "cottage" in the next sentence. Change "We would love to go to the Farm any other lifestyle club you want to meet at." to "We would love to go to the Farm OR any other lifestyle club you want to meet at." In the "What Else"section, change "If you want to just let go and know your safe email him." to "If you want to just let go and know YOU ARE safe, THEN JUST email him." The middle paragraph of this section has several comma and capitalization details and should be "You will need to meet hubby and hold a conversation. Confidence is key, thick cock under 9 inches (thickness is good), be employed (she is), be good at oral (she is), like thick women, can host on occasion, be ready to meet in the next 10 days (spur of the moment as well) and have an imagination."
Brea CA			Username hidden (203 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	You are very clear in what you want and don't want, and that's always good. Hopefully people will take the time to read through your whole profile. You could use some good public pics to spark interest (you can blur his face or take pics just of him from the neck down). I would add more white space in between to make your profile LOOK more readable. Also, there are just a few misspelled words and wrong use of words like "to" or "too." not a big big deal though. I would suggest taking out some of the negatives. You start off with a lot of "not" and "no" among what you do like...We like this, but NOT that...kind of statements. When you use too many negative sounding words, it comes across as negative statements. Watch a bit for that. Good luck. You seem to know yourselves well and that will help you in your searches. G.
San Antonio TX			Username hidden (4093 post)

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TOPIC: Hello