Just offering feedback on things that raise red flags when we're looking for members of interest. Profile looks much better (pagination and content) after your revision.

Only thing really flagging out now is your last paragraph. The powers that be at SLS frown upon mentioning other [competitive?] websites in profiles, especially when referencing others there for more info or to make contact.

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We both found the content generally informative, although too boastful for our liking. Neither of us care how fast you get your dates blindfolded or into their pants -- sadly, that reads of a typical single male. And we agree with BiFYork regarding the 'white space' in the first two paragraphs. Further, reading both profiles, we also found your new profile claim of being drama-free conflicting with your old profile's descriptions of the relationship's failings and finger-pointing. Given you've chosen to keep the old profile active, continuing to display her pictures (along with the one of your eyes/arm/wristwatch), and updating the text as you have, you're advertising unresolved issues and associated drama. Makes us wonder if you air and share all your activities concerning former partners, a lacking of discretion, as the sampling in both profiles seems to indicate. Take this as advice, or take it as our observations, your choice. We offer it freely either way and wish you good luck in your transition.

While I loved your profile (because, unlike some on here, I actually like to read), you may want to rethink your paragraphs and use a bit more "white" space (gray space, literally, but you know). You write well; of course, you already know that, and I think I would leave your profile as is because it clearly and abundantly states who you are and what you would enjoy. I adore your use of commas. But I'm not the "norm" on here and you want to appeal to possibly more of a variety of women than cerebral perhaps? That said, most women who take the time to read your profile would certainly enjoy spending other time with you as well, since they've already invested a great deal of their time in just reading it. ha. So, what am I saying? Perhaps break up your paragraphs a little, at least the first one, to draw in your readers. In other words, your profile is great. Lengthy, but length is NOT a bad thing. Your pictures: I "get" the ones with puckered lips and tongue-sticking-out, but neither of those does your chin justice. Can you pucker up or stick out your tongue without squeezing your chin into a relatively unattractive dimpled facial feature? Or maybe at least add a relaxed facial pic to the mix? You're sure to do well on here, and I wish you all the luck you can stand. Gina