Go ahead and critque our profile but please be gentle : Swingers Discussion 175080

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Go ahead and critque our profile but please be gentle : Swingers Discussion 175080

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TOPIC: Go ahead and critque our profile but please be gentle ;)

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User Details are only visible to members.	Your profile could use a few specifics that make it stand out from others that are too similar. The bed notcher line, and some of the other phrases are things we read in most profiles. What sets you apart from anyone else? You did a good job describing "him" with his boston accent....and even "her" with the nipple remark. Now, do the same with lines such as "shy until she gets to know you." Is there another way you can get that across without saying it in a cliched way? Suggestions? She's quiet, but you know there's mischief underneath that shy exterior. You might think she's shy at first, but once warmed up, she is like a steam engine. I don't know...those are kind of lame...hahaha...but maybe you will think of your own ways to say what has been said so many times. It's like some of those profiles that say, "we are not Ken and Barbie..." blah blah blah...you want those to say it differently from everyone else. Good luck...you have good pics, good attitudes, and will certainly be fine. Have fun. Gina
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User Details are only visible to members.	It looks good. You have all the info that's needed.
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TOPIC: Go ahead and critque our profile but please be gentle ;)