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User Details are only visible to members.	Your welcome cutie! ;) don't worry Scandle, I got your back... lol.
Kunkletown PA			Username hidden (2981 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	Good catch, KD! How did I miss those???
Sheboygan Falls WI			Username hidden (6971 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	Hey James, Welcome to the forums! :) I like your profile, you are very attractive, great pics and I think you sound like a very nice guy!! ;) I still see some grammar errors though. I'm not sure how many people think grammar and puncuation is a deal breaker, but it does represent you better to not have too many. You also have some capital letters right in the middle of a sentence, not sure if there's a reason for that. (first sentence) Some corrections I see: -"...and have good a conversations with." --take out the 'a' -"In a single ladies, ..." ---(which is where you may want to be, lol) ...but maybe 'With single ladies' would be better. -"Last of all, outside of the life style..." --- lifestyle -"I love the outdoors and doing Outdoor activities. such as hiking, camping fishing, hunting, or just taking a walk some wear." ---I love the outdoors and doing outdoor activities such as hiking, camping, fishing and hunting or just taking a walk somewhere. Oh, and I personally like seeing a couple (not too many) "lol" 's. It makes me feel like the person has a sense of humor, which for me personally is huge. You can put one right after "I don’t bite… well, maybe I do, a little, lol." if you would like. Best of luck to you and Happy Swinging!! ;)
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User Details are only visible to members.	James1345, Scandle sums it up nicely. On pictures, you might also delete the cellphone photo of you taking your own picture in a mirror, it detracts from the rest of your collection. One other thing that presents a very big negative is the posting your Yahoo or other external contact info. By ignoring the site's rules, you're showing others you don't care about their play rules or limits...perpetuating the single male pariah :( Good luck, Mrs YF3
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User Details are only visible to members.	James, welcome to the forums. You seem like a pretty nice guy, but it may help to take a look at the profiles of some successful single men here and do a comparison. I'd suggest FunAhoy, NicAtNight and others who post regularly on the Forums. This is a fun place to connect with people and you might actually get lucky! It is not unheard of. ;-) Proper punctuation and spelling can help a lot. You wrote "I don’t bite well maybe I do a little." It sounds like your ability to bite is lacking, like there is something wrong with your mouth. Consider changing it to "I don't bite... well, maybe I do, a little!" "out doors type of actives " should be "outdoors types of activities" "does not change your mind in anyway." should be "does not change your mind in any way." "I still a sweet down to earth guy." should be "I'm still a sweet, down-to-earth guy." Some people are really attracted to people with tattoos, so keep that as a positive attribute. You have a nice number of photos. A full body shot where you are clothed, doing something you enjoy, would be good. We aren't in the search for single men so I can't speak from experience to answer your question. No doubt others can. Good luck, and have fun!
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