Well, I read your profile, then read ohmysugar's comments. I really have nothing more to add. I would second the comment about adding a better photo in your public profile showing the both of you, but without the faces (I understand the need for discretion).

I hate to be a "me too" post, but I wanted you to know that it was reviewed by more than one person! :)

Hi there! I'm kink of a stickler ~ but here are my thoughts... I think that it sounds good. You're honest about being new and wanting to figure out what you like and explore. I think that's awesome! I think that there are too many profiles that either don't say that they are new or say that they are new and are up for everything. People that are interested in you will know that this is all brand new to you. Best way to start! As for nit picking ~ b/c that's what I do... LOL! I'm not crazy about the pic. It's from so far away that it's hard to tell what her figure is like. Take a little time to get a good body shot of her and him (or just her, if that's your preference) for public viewing and be sure that you have some clear pics in your private galleries. Lots of people fib about their height and weight, so an accurate body shot is important. There are some comma's missing here and there. Just take a look for them. I'm sure that if you can spell "laureate" then you can find them! ;) I don't know what your criteria are, but I'd eliminate the "probably" from the probably not interested and probably won't work. It probably won't cut down much on the emails from SG's that don't meet what's stated in your profile, but what the heck? If she wants to look for a gorgeous guy with a box of rocks in his head, she can. If you want more, I'd skip the probably's. Just my opinion, tho. I'd also ask face pic w/ the cock pics. Just ask them to open a private gallery that has both. Fair enough. If she likes cock pics and is a face girl, what's the point of thinking one is what she wants, if the other isn't? Change your "wild" interest to maybe half way. That typically means that you're full swap. Your profile does read that she'll be w/ single guys, but that other than that, y'all are just having sex w/ each other. I'd 86 the v-safe comment, unless you play bareback under the radar. That's kind of a code for being OK or wanting to go w/o condoms. FYI. I'd explain what "kinkier" sex is. There's a lot there that's open for interpretation. If you don't want to, maybe just tweek it a little and mention that you'd rather talk about it in person. Hope this helps! Have fun!!

We are looking for some constructive criticism of our profile. Thanks in advance.