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TOPIC: Critique our profile please =D
Created by: virona
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Please critique our profile. It's okay to be anal, we can also use advice and improve our profile.
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Thanks Tablefor3. I changed my intro to what you said, made it much shorter and logical.

If anyone else has tips let us know.

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One other thing. Play by the rules and delete your Yahoo name. Management *seriously* frowns on external contact info being posted.

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Virona,

You've generally got a good profile, but your first section left me kind of wishy-washy, assuming everyone is comfortable, if that's what is wanted, but it's not required...

For starters, you don't define "like minded". Someone could take take that to mean "you like having juggling clowns holding the video camera while you encourage the dog to..." Expect those perverts to send you a message asking for he and his wife to join you, and they'll get pissed because suddenly your undefined "like minded" doesn't match what he thought it meant.

Lose "like minded" (and loosen up on the "policy"...it is so cold and corporate sounding) to avoid misunderstandings. Try being more direct with your interests, like this: "We a no pressure couple interested in soft or full swap couples and solo females. If everyone is comfortable, we are open to playing on the first meeting."

Good luck, Mrs TF3

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Great changes! And you communicate so well - makes you that much more attractive.

Jenga!

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Thanks for your help!! *Reread our profile, deleted a few things (If you can think of anything else in particular let us know) *Deleted one costume pic, going to add more later on that are different *Fixed spelling errors

Any other suggestions let us know =D

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Wow Virona, great profile and pics! Very fun read.

You have some really great photos. I agree with Hot that you need to mix it up a bit more. Love the couples shots in costume, but just a few would be fine. From the photos, you're a very attractive couple :)

For the profile: "We Are Looking For" - the only thing I would add is which pace you prefer - do you play on first meet or prefer to take your time.

There are two typos I found: Under the section, "Description," in the second paragraph - "equipement" should be "equipment." Under the last section, "What Else We'd Like to Say...," change "facepics" to "face pics." I like the part about Jenga, lol.

I see you already have certs and not surprised. Best wishes and have fun! Kat

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Profile: very clear and easy to read. Try rereading it yourself and eliminate any time you repeat something - IE, shorten it. In my opinion, profiles are ads, not resumes. The easier a profile is to read, the easier it is for someone to ping you. Oh, and I like the Jenga hook. Perfect way to encourage people to reach out to you. Jenga!!

Pics: your profile makes you seem very friendly. The pics do the same. If I'd change anything, is that you need variety. Clearly, You go to parties to dress up...but to be clear, that seems to mean "costume" not "tux and cocktail dress". If you don't want to add some "traditional sexy pics", add some where you're outdoors or not posing. You seem like a cute couple. Flaunt it!!

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Please critique our profile. It's okay to be anal, we can also use advice and improve our profile.

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