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TOPIC: Critique_our_profile_please
Created by: Sun_N_Moon69 The original post for this thread was deleted.
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I agree with Fun - your profile has a lot of exclamation points that aren't necessary.

The overwhelming number of ass pics, though the ass is lovely, makes the view redundant. I suggest selecting a few for your public profile, and since you obviously love the ass shots, creating a separate file for other ass-lovers to open. Also, it is easy to crop heads out of pictures if you want to keep that out of public viewing and still want to show your bodies. Giving a variety of interesting shots goes a long way toward attracting others.

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Hi Sun n Moon, and welcome to the forums. I think your profile is fine, but it could be sharpened up a little. For example, your first paragraph has several comments about how you like to meet and play, but these are separated by your preferences regarding the physical attributes of potential playmates. I think two short paragraphs addressing these things separately would flow better.

Pay attention to punctuation. You have several double periods. One of my pet peeves is the overuse of exclamation points; I think it detracts from their power when they are called for, but that's just me.

As for pics, I also couldn't see them all because the SLS pic server is acting up again. Of the thumbnails I could see, it looks like an awful lot of derriere pics. Nice profile; good luck.

Belle Chasse LA
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Seems perfect to me.

Couldn't see all your pix, but that is a bug at SLS.

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