Wow...
that's different than the first time I read it.

I like it-- Good luck!

lol, Mewzie yeah it was "tweaked". LOL

Get some pictures that look as if they weren't taken during a London fog. Everyone likes a smiling picture with you dressed to impress. Try to add pictures that you think let your interests and personality show through. Looks are all important here. If you went into a bar and looked around at the people there, you would immediately know who is attractive to you. Same here. Of course, first impressions have to be followed up which makes what you write and your other actions important.
Good luck

If you've ever read my posts in here, you'll read that I usually have A LOT to say about profiles, mostly about changes that are needed.

Yours? Just right as it is. I smiled, I got a bit turned on, I nodded, and I looked at your pics with appreciation. At no time was I confused or unclear. You write well. You look cute. So...enjoy some success and let us know how it all works out for you.

I would say "good luck," but I don't think you need it...you'll be just fine.

Gina

arcane,
I like the changes you made. Try that out, I think definately you will get some emails :0).

Fuzzy pictures tend to hide things in the back round .

What to say. Well I can tell you, not very many profiles make me smile and say did I just read what the fuck I just read? Well, yes indeed I did! Well, I can tell you that I can read from your profile that you are a very intelligent man who really knows what you like and what feels good. I can tell you however that I think that your profile is so brutally honest and frankly provocative...I think it might scare off anyone other than couples where the husband is openly bisexual. Any man who is simply bi friendly or not "homophobic" will honestly probably shy away from your profile. I am not judging you, I like people who know and accept who they are...but in regard to your average swinger yeah, people will be alarmed by the part where you say what you like about men. I did thoroghly enjoy the part where you say what you like about women. I think you are very erotic. I would suggest, if you are looking for couples where the husband is bi curious or bi friendly, that you tone down the bisexual part. I think simply saying that you are bisexual is enough. I like your pics, you have a very sexy body. However, the pics are fuzzy and it would be nice to see you in clothes.

I think you should include a full-body pic of yourself fully-dressed.