Thanks so much for all the awesome advice! I've utilized the advice I've gotten so far, and I really think my profile sounds better. Still need to work on getting more pics. Anyone want to help me with that? Lol...

If anyone else has any more criticism, by all means, have at it. You guys rock! Thanks!

-Josh

Very sexy all the way around! Your personality comes across very well in your profile. I can tell that you are a really fun guy. The only sentence that gets me is the one in the beginning where you talk about how you don't want a relationship so swinging is the perfect thing for you. I'm not sure how to reword that but it gives off the impression that maybe you are just utilizing the lifestyle for the ease of hooking up versus hooking up in the vanilla world. Overall though....damn, I wish I lived in Florida!! lol ; )

Nice profile. Here's what stands out that may need changing: Take out "up for anything" in your tagline...that's been overused and sounds like you have no set standards...doesn't make you sound like a gem in the lifestyle. You state it in your profile, so don't state it in your tag. Occasionally has one "s". It's the word I used to misspell the most often, so it stands out to me. :) Every single one of your sentences starts with the word: "I" Of course, you are talking about yourself, but to make smoother and more interesting reading, you can reword some of your sentences so that there is a break in the "I..." statements. For example, "I sometimes..." can be turned around to "Sometimes, I..." A minor thing and maybe a bit picky on my part, but if you read your profile out loud, the sentences start to sound a bit monotonous. An easy fix. Your last paragraphs read the most smoothly. Take a couple cues from that. You're cute, well-spoken and have a good attitude about yourself and about swinging. Add a couple more pictures, and I would imagine you having great success and a lot of fun. Gina

I've been in the lifestyle for a couple of years now, but only recently joined sls. I was hoping there might be a few of you who would be kind enough to critique my profile for me. My goal is to give enough information so people can form an accurate idea of what I am like, without droning on forever and sounding redundant or desperate, lol! Sometimes I get a little wordy, and I thought maybe a fresh unbiased pair of eyes might help. Any advice or criticism anyone can offer would be greatly appreciated! Thanks!

-Josh