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Created by: ff38dd Original Starting post for this thread:
Take a look at you profile. Is it filled with bad grammar, mis-spelled words, bad punctuation? We have read some where the whole profile was one continuous sentence with no caps to start a sentence or periods at the end of a sentence. "we want to meat couples where the woman is bi sue is a tall blonde who loves oral jim is very talented with the women we have a hot tub and love to entertain at home we do not smoke pleese consider this smart fun and exciting couple for your next encounter" Now, wasn't that a little hard to follow? Anyway, a simple cap here and there and a period where needed would make a big difference. By the way, could you please critique our profile. It's rather long and it may be too busy, with too much info. We have actually received many comments on our profile and it's content. No one had made any negative comments, but maybe they are just not sharing their comments. Thanks !!!!

Created by: ff38dd
Original Starting post for this thread:

Take a look at you profile. Is it filled with bad grammar, mis-spelled words, bad punctuation? We have read some where the whole profile was one continuous sentence with no caps to start a sentence or periods at the end of a sentence. 
"we want to meat couples where the woman is bi sue is a tall blonde who loves oral jim is very talented with the women we have a hot tub and love to entertain at home we do not smoke pleese consider this smart fun and exciting couple for your next encounter" 

Now, wasn't that a little hard to follow? 

Anyway, a simple cap here and there and a period where needed would make a big difference. 

By the way, could you please critique our profile. It's rather long and it may be too busy, with too much info. We have actually received many comments on our profile and it's content.  No one had made any negative comments,  but maybe they are just not sharing their comments. Thanks !!!!

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User Details are only visible to members.	sexyswcouple, I didn't see your old profile but in my opinion your current profile is great. Right on target, as to what you are looking for. Wishing you the best of luck in finding what you are looking for in the lifestyle. ff38dd
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User Details are only visible to members.	Thanks Batteries, Soon we will change it slighly as we are no longer newbies. We have met many couples and learned a lot in one year. ff38dd...Charlie and Kathy
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User Details are only visible to members.	We recently re-wrote our profile, and would love to have some feedback....please feel free to comment! Thanks. D&J
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User Details are only visible to members.	Take a look at you profile. Is it filled with bad grammar, mis-spelled words, bad punctuation? We have read some where the whole profile was one continuous sentence with no caps to start a sentence or periods at the end of a sentence. "we want to meat couples where the woman is bi sue is a tall blonde who loves oral jim is very talented with the women we have a hot tub and love to entertain at home we do not smoke pleese consider this smart fun and exciting couple for your next encounter" Now, wasn't that a little hard to follow? Anyway, a simple cap here and there and a period where needed would make a big difference. By the way, could you please critique our profile. It's rather long and it may be too busy, with too much info. We have actually received many comments on our profile and it's content. No one had made any negative comments, but maybe they are just not sharing their comments. Thanks !!!!
Pottstown PA			Username hidden (242 post)

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