I would really suggest you read your profile out loud to each other and you will find that you pause at things that can be eliminated or shortened. Tighten up some of the modifiers and qualifiers...you don't need them. You can simply state things and leave them as they are, for example: "I've been told..." "I guess you could say..." The lines around those phrases sound much better, more confident and precise without all the ornamentation. It sounds almost as if you are appologetic for your preferences and inexperience, and you don't have to be. Read your profile without all the things in parenthesis and see if makes sense without those...it did to me, as I read it both ways, and liked it much better without those added phrases. Good luck...you guys are cute and intelligent and are sure to have a good time. GIna

Ok, been toying with our profile off and on for the last month or so. Looking for some feedback of what others think. Sometimes I think maybe we went a little over-board, but we just wanted to be clear about us and what we are looking for. Hopefully after this weekend 5/9-5/11, we will have some new better pics. Never afraid of criticism, so let us know what you think. Thanks in advance to all those that offer any advice on what we should possibly change.