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TOPIC: Any advice on our profile

Created by: JNA4PLAY Original Starting post for this thread:
We've been on here for a while now, and actually longer than our profile says since this is our second account we've created. We get some good responses here and there, but since I'd seen this forum topic I thought I'd see if there was any helpful advice out there. We don't have any certs unfortunately, but we have met some couples in our area at a couple parties. TIA for your feedback! Anthony

Created by: JNA4PLAY
Original Starting post for this thread:

We've been on here for a while now, and actually longer than our profile says since this is our second account we've created.

We get some good responses here and there, but since I'd seen this forum topic I thought I'd see if there was any helpful advice out there. We don't have any certs unfortunately, but we have met some couples in our area at a couple parties.

TIA for your feedback!

Anthony

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User Details are only visible to members.	Thanks for your response TF3. Your criticism has been accepted and you made some really good points. We do have PG photo's up but they're our private photos. And, now, typing that out has me thinking that is sort of backwards, haha... But we've had those pics up before and changing them hasn't really made much of a difference in the traffic we receive. To be honest our successes in the lifestyle have not been directly from this website, other than notifications of events that we attend, so reading your response has shed a little light onto what may be the reason for that. Also it doesn't really help that our local scene is a bit scarce and being that we're in CA there are a lot (<--- ) of ken and barbie types here looking for the same, which we are not. Anyhow, thanks again for taking the time to respond!
Nipomo CA			Username hidden (3 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	Have you read your profile to each other recently? We found it is a hard read, so many "of course" and "in bed" statements, we got bored quickly. Maturity level also scores low with "no homo", "dude" and "nice tits" -- are you still in high school? There is an excessive use of quotations placed around words, and an overuse of all-capitals to emphasis on various (random?) words in your profile. On the spelling department, basing the corrections on your context, wont should be won't (contraction of will not), alot should be a lot (a great deal). On descriptions, it is clear she is being marketed and he is along for the masturbation, not really working this as a couple. Even your pictures leave us with the impression her "tits" are all that she's got as the selling point, and he only cares about grabbing his crotch :( Add additional details about him under the description portion, and some pictures of both, PG would be best, to show you as fun adults, not just two sex-hungry teen-holdovers. Finally, prepare for your profile to to be shut down once SLS sees you posted your Yahoo contact info...not following the site's TOS is very much frowned upon by management. Offered as constructive criticism, looking forward to seeing your improved profile :)
Saint Paul MN			Username hidden (467 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	Thanks for the reply ST :) Yeah, we feel old tho! I understand what you're saying and that's great advice. Much appreciated. -J&A
Nipomo CA			Username hidden (3 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	Welcome to the boards! Young at heart????? You're 29 and 30! That's what people our age say! You need to delete that and say you still like to party, etc. Also, I'd move the photo of your male up in the picture poster so there's a photo of each of you on the first page of your profile. Finally, because you're both smokers, you might want to expand the type of people you want to reach by saying how much you smoke and what accommodations you'll make for non-smokers. Good profile overall! -ST
Kitty Hawk NC			Username hidden (163 post)

User Details are only visible to members.	We've been on here for a while now, and actually longer than our profile says since this is our second account we've created. We get some good responses here and there, but since I'd seen this forum topic I thought I'd see if there was any helpful advice out there. We don't have any certs unfortunately, but we have met some couples in our area at a couple parties. TIA for your feedback! Anthony
Nipomo CA			Username hidden (3 post)

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