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TOPIC: Any_advice_on_my_profile_would_be_appreciated
Created by: ternst
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Hi,

I have been on the site for a while now but just started to use some of the features like this.

I have corresponded with a couple of people but have not connected with anyone as of yet.

If anybody has suggestions I would appreciate the help.

The JollyMon

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ternst, welcome to the Forums.

We aren't looking for single men so my critique is somewhat unqualified due to lack of experience, but overall I thought your profile looked okay. Not real exciting, but nice. Perhaps it would help for you to list other activities you like to do besides eating, drinking, and having sex - unless that's all you want with a mature woman. Are you willing to travel? Do you like shows? Are there attractions in your area that you would like to enjoy with her? This is not a dating site in the traditional sense, but some women might be intrigued by you if they see you are interested in more than the limited activities listed.

A couple of small points: "Quite and shy" in the first paragraph should be "Quiet and shy" 2nd paragraph, 2nd sentence you wrote "Know the meaning of boundaries..." You need a subject in the sentence. I think you meant "I know the meaning of boundaries..." but without the "I" it sounds like a command. 3rd paragraph "womans" should be "woman's" with an apostrophe. 4th paragraph, first sentence: "wnat no interaction" should be "want no interaction"

You jump back and forth between full sentences and incomplete ones. It would be easier to read if you used full sentences throughout.

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Hi,

I have been on the site for a while now but just started to use some of the features like this.

I have corresponded with a couple of people but have not connected with anyone as of yet.

If anybody has suggestions I would appreciate the help.

The JollyMon

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TOPIC: Any advice on my profile would be appreciated
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