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Thank you Scandle!

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tallnskinny, welcome to the Forums. The better profiles section is one area that works best if each person/couple asking for input on their profile creates a new thread. I suggest deleting what you wrote here, then reposting it in a new thread within Better Profiles. That way all of the comments will be directly for you, not another person that you piggy-backed on.

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Looks good to me, clear and concise.

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We've added the pictures and made some new comments which we think are more descriptive of who and what we are.

Niagara Falls Canada
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Nifty, there are some word choice errors that need to be corrected now.

"If a second date envelops...game on!" That should be "If a second date develops...game on!" (envelop means to surround)

"Face pics must be legible" .... some other word than legible. Legible means readable handwriting or print. Perhaps clear would be a better word here.

"We are a NO means NO," .... what would you think about adding, playfully, that you are also a YES means YES couple?

"We prefer afternoon/ early evening meets. times." Too many periods here.

The rest of that paragraph has a few punctuation or grammar errors, but it's no big deal.

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We have made some further changes. Any comments?

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Nicely done, Nifty! I hope your profile now garners a lot of interest.

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Thank you all for your suggestions. WE hope the pic of the two of us meets with your approval.

Niagara Falls Canada
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To increase your takers, I think you need a public pic of the two of you and it doesn't have to be swimsuits either. Just a nice photo of both of you,crop your faces out if you want discretion.

When you are looking at profiles...don't you want to see something to indicatethat there is a male half present and participating?

Shelly

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