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TOPIC: Another profile critique request
Created by: FunTogether9
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Good morning, if any of you get a chance we would love some feedback on our profile.

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Thank you for the suggestions. Made a couple of changes based on them. We will remove the duplicate pics as soon as we get a chance to take some more.

Grafton MA
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You should remove the duplicate pictures.

Allenhurst NJ
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It looks pretty fab to me. You've got nice pics of both of you and a write-up that tells exactly where you are on the journey.

The only thing that stands out for me is that you mention always playing together three times. For those folks who bother to read profiles, saying it once is enough. For those that don't read profiles you could say it 300 times and it wouldn't matter. Perhaps eliminate one of the mentions and just address it in one of the first e-mail exchanges with potential partners?

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Good morning, if any of you get a chance we would love some feedback on our profile.

Grafton MA
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TOPIC: Another profile critique request