Help
FORUMS › Successful Swinging › Better Profiles › Always wanting to improve my profile critique requested
TOPIC: Always_wanting_to_improve_my_profile_critique_requested
Created by: lifes2short4sex
Original Starting post for this thread:
In fighting the uphill battle of singleguydom, I'm always looking to improve my image. I tried to be original in my writing for my profile, but there is a fine line between being cute and being a dork....lol. Please let me know what you think and how I might improve it. A big thank you for your help. DSB

1 
1 to 3 of 3
User Details are only visible to members.
I very much enjoyed it too. My parter refers to me as a fully loaded cadillac with ots of options. Your profile made me chuckle. Thanks Sugar!

Raven

Fort Worth TX
Username hidden
(8589 posts)
User Details are only visible to members.
Looks like another great profile! I don't think it's dorky at all. Very nice, very clear, and very likeable. I like how you talk about yourself like you're a car--could have been a really bad move if not written well, but you pulled it off just fine. My only suggestion is to add something in the last 2 areas so they're not blank. I don't know why, but it really looks better if there's something in there. Happy hunting!

Tyler TX
Username hidden
(261 posts)
User Details are only visible to members.
In fighting the uphill battle of singleguydom, I'm always looking to improve my image. I tried to be original in my writing for my profile, but there is a fine line between being cute and being a dork....lol. Please let me know what you think and how I might improve it. A big thank you for your help. DSB

Gulf Shores AL
Username hidden
(3 posts)
1 
1 to 3 of 3
TOPIC: Always wanting to improve my profile critique requested
This site does not contain sexually explicit images as defined in 18 U.S.C. 2256.
Accordingly, neither this site nor the contents contained herein are covered by the record-keeping provisions of 18 USC 2257(a)-(c).
Disclaimer: This website contains adult material. You must be over 18 to enter or 21 where applicable by law.
All Members are over 18 years of age.
Terms of Use | Privacy Policy
 
Copyright © 1998-2016 DashBoardHosting, LLC. All Rights Reserved.