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TOPIC: Always wanting to improve my profile critique requested
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| In fighting the uphill battle of singleguydom, I'm always looking to improve my image. I tried to be original in my writing for my profile, but there is a fine line between being cute and being a dork....lol. Please let me know what you think and how I might improve it. A big thank you for your help. DSB |
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I very much enjoyed it too. My parter refers to me as a fully loaded cadillac with ots of options. Your profile made me chuckle. Thanks Sugar!
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Looks like another great profile! I don't think it's dorky at all. Very nice, very clear, and very likeable. I like how you talk about yourself like you're a car--could have been a really bad move if not written well, but you pulled it off just fine. My only suggestion is to add something in the last 2 areas so they're not blank. I don't know why, but it really looks better if there's something in there.
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In fighting the uphill battle of singleguydom, I'm always looking to improve my image. I tried to be original in my writing for my profile, but there is a fine line between being cute and being a dork....lol. Please let me know what you think and how I might improve it. A big thank you for your help. DSB
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TOPIC: Always wanting to improve my profile critique requested
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