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Not much about you, each and as a couple. Expand your second section, reorganizing it to eliminate confusing subject jumps present in your current version: we, she, he, we, she. Perhaps, as a starter, use three distinct paragraphs, giving you room to add the much needed further information:
She is pretty, with beautiful breasts, loves toys and is muti-orgasmic! He is good looking, and loves to make everyone laugh. (Hardly enough to know what he is like.) Both have great personalites, and love having a good time. We are professional, DD free, with a family, discretion is a must. Good luck, Mr TF3 |
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I would personally change "with some curves and big boobs" to something like "with some curves with a well endowed voluptuous chest" (just sounds a little sexier, to me at least). I would also change "We both love big boobs" to something like "We both love the look and feel of large breasts" (breasts and chest just sound a tad bit more mature than boobs)
Other wise I think your profile is good. Glad to see you posted face pics in your profile, because attraction is more than T&A. Mrs. Camaro |
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I would also change "she wants to eat an other woman out" to something a little less juvenile sounding.
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