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TOPIC: A little help please
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What do you think of my profile?
Please be honest. Thanks, B |
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Honestly? I think it needs a bit more help than can be offered here. I would suggest you read it out loud to yourself to see how it sounds. That always helps in finding things that sound unclear. Starting with your tagline, the run-on makes no sense if you just read it straight through, as punctuated.
"daid" should read "said" Add more pictures, more about yourself. Read through the forums and find out what women/couples want in single males and adjust your profile to fit that, and you'll have better luck. G. |
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What do you think of my profile?
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